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So yeah that's about it. I haven't made another comic since this one but I definitely want to. I remember learning a lot immediately after finishing but 2 years later I'm recognizing even more little things I could improve on, things like some slightly confusing dialogue and compositions, backgrounds or color choices, the overall strangeness of this entire plot, etc. But I'm sure whatever I end up making next will be even better! Maybe something with Elves doing cool Elf shit. Who knows, really?

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Since I'm still trying to get into the groove of making comics, any feedback at all would be REALLY appreciated! Have a good one!

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Sep 13, 2023 13:05

Very cute comic! Love how expressive the characters are, great work

Sep 13, 2023 13:20 by Jon

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!


While I would love to go on an adventure, writing them is enough for me.
Sep 13, 2023 13:08 by Polina "Line" Arteev

I love your characters; they have so much personality! This was such a fun read :D

Seek a new dawn, in Malkora!
Craft a bright new world, in Ayun Sovos!
Sep 13, 2023 13:21 by Jon

Thanks! Characters are absolutely my specialty :)


While I would love to go on an adventure, writing them is enough for me.
Dec 4, 2023 01:07 by Reanna R

I love this! The characters, the artstyle, the expressions, the story - it is all just very *chefs kiss*

Dec 4, 2023 01:21 by Jon

Thanks so much!!!


While I would love to go on an adventure, writing them is enough for me.
Dec 5, 2023 14:42

This is how a skeleton SHOULD be roleplayed

Dec 5, 2023 14:49 by Jon

That's what I'm saying on GOD


While I would love to go on an adventure, writing them is enough for me.
Dec 14, 2023 16:19

Aw. This was really adorable! I enjoyed reading it and the characters are amazing. Nicely done. *thumbs up*

Dec 15, 2023 04:35 by Jon

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!!!


While I would love to go on an adventure, writing them is enough for me.